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Sunday, 19 June 2016

विरासत On Father's Day

एक सनक एक जुनू मुझमे, जो तुझसे विरासत में आया है,
वो जिद्दीपन, वो कुछ बात पे अड़ जाना
वो हर चीज की तेह तक पहुंचना
वो जज्बा कि कुछ कर जाना, गलत सह न पाना 
गर सही है तो भिड़ जाना मगर अंजाम तक पहुंचाना 
थोड़ा ज्यादा ही है, पर कहते हैं ना, वालिद से आगे औलाद होती है
और आया है वो सीधापन, वो बड़प्पन, 
मगर थोड़ा कम,
कम रह गयी वो ज़हनियत, वो ताकत 
जो औरो को भी सवांरती थी, मुश्किल में संभलती और संभालती थी,
कई उम्रे लगेंगी तुझ जैसा बनने को, 
मगर तेरी हिदायत है खुद को खुद रहने दो,
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हरेक अच्छी और कच्ची आदत के लिए शुक्रिया

By Lipika

10 comments:

  1. The genotype and phenotype of a father indeed reflects in his offspring. I liked the way you penned the father side of your personality. Keep blogging

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    1. :) Thank you Harish...I realise it more with his absence how much I am like him :D both good or bad

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  2. Lipika... so well expressed. Just proves... departing people live in the souls of loved ones. Stay the way you are!

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  3. Thank you Seema for your touching feedback

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  4. The genotype and phenotype of a father indeed reflects in his offspring. I liked the way you penned the father side of your personality. Keep blogging

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  5. Hi Lipika,
    Beautifully penned thoughts betraying a loss albeit with a pride in the values imbibed and therefore a Father lives as long as children are there to cherish the sweet silent thoughts.

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    1. And equally beautifully interpreted Bhagirathi ji. Thank you for your compliment. Regards

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  6. Hi Lipika,
    Beautifully penned thoughts betraying a loss albeit with a pride in the values imbibed and therefore a Father lives as long as children are there to cherish the sweet silent thoughts.

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  7. Very well written Lipika! Hats off to you....

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  8. Beautifully written. ...👌👌👌👌

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